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I need your help,
But I can't ask.
I've hidden too long,
Behind this mask.

I'm glad you offered,
Don't get me wrong.
I'll find the courage,
Before too long.

I need your help,
I'm glad you asked.
In front of you,
I've been unmasked.

I need my mask,
Don't give it back.
Just help me find,
The things I lack.

I've made the decision.
I've taken the time.
It helps form my thoughts,
To write them in rhyme.

The time has come,
Today I'll ask.
Together we'll shatter,
This soul-sucking mask.
©2005-2009 ~Disastercake
:icondisastercake:

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This poem means a lot to me. Well, kind of. It really sums up how I was feeling this morning. And I think it turned out well.

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I LOVE the meaning behind this poem, it sooo relates to my day today. Why do people hide behind masks... for a false sense of security, but it's so hard to just break free of the masks...

Loveleh poem. :)

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Spicy Disaster! =D

I love the same intelligence I hate.
:iconlil-crying-emo-kid:
mhrm... same thing with me... people are always so weird when they are hiding.
great poem, you
:hug:

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If you cried when Axel faded, copy and paste this into your signature.
:icongoodbye-kitty975:
the power of decideing to look for help. this one made my eyes tear.

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proud owner of the Flying Goofball
:icondisastercake:
thank you. i'm fighting my mask...

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~Allie :frail:
:crazy:

-What if this world is another planet's hell?

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*Too much information is dangerous.


:sadangel:
:icondisastercake:
:nod: maybe that's why i'm so weird most of the time... :o

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~Allie :frail:
:crazy:

-What if this world is another planet's hell?

*~*~*~:-:~*~*~*

*Ten bucks a quack! :evillaugh:

*Too much information is dangerous.


:sadangel:
:icondisastercake:
aww :hug:

--
~Allie :frail:
:crazy:

-What if this world is another planet's hell?

*~*~*~:-:~*~*~*

*Ten bucks a quack! :evillaugh:

*Too much information is dangerous.


:sadangel:
:iconlilithlairpoetry:
I can relate wholeheartedly on this topic....Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!

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"There is nothing to fear, when I'm here, I want to feel your touch, because I love you so much!! Love you Stephanie!!" =LilithLairPoetry

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:icondisastercake:
thanks very much for your comments! :hug:

--
~Allie :frail:
:crazy:

-What if this world is another planet's hell?

*~*~*~:-:~*~*~*

*Ten bucks a quack! :evillaugh:

*Too much information is dangerous.


:sadangel:
:iconlilithlairpoetry:
:nod: Your welcome!

--
"There is nothing to fear, when I'm here, I want to feel your touch, because I love you so much!! Love you Stephanie!!" =LilithLairPoetry

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